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Untitled Anger

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I'm sick of everybody,
Thinking they know best!
How to act,
What to do,
Always put down to the test!

They stand there and they judge me,
Stuck in their mindset.
Trying to always change me,
When I'm not ready yet!

Who the hell asked you?
Where is it your place?
You think you are entitled?
Come on! Say it to my face!

The Negatives!
The Positives!
No matter what I do!
They always see the bad,
The good left out of view!

There is no pleasing people,
Their standards held so high!
They think that they all know me?!
WELL THEY CAN ALL GO DIE!

"We're just trying to help,"
I hear it all the time!
It's not their choice to make!
IT'S MINE MINE MINE!

Who the hell are you!?
To define the way I act?
You're not some great authority!
AND THAT'S A GOD DAMN FACT!

Go ahead!
Pull out your psychology and mindgames!
You think that it will work?
All I see are false claims.

You think you understand me,
You think you know it all?
Go ahead try to break me!
Don't blame me if you fall!

In the end?
You're talking to a damn brick wall!

I think that you should stop,
and consider for a time.
That you do not control me.
And that is the point of this rhyme.

So step away, and see me for me.
See who I am, and what I want to be.
Don't try to change me, and maybe we can be friends.
And in the future, maybe make amends.

It was never your place,
It was never your right.
It is only mine,
And for that I'll fight!
Thought of this while laying down. Rehearsed it a few times in my head but like always when I actually went to the computer to type it, I forgot what I had 'sang'. I think I need a recorder..
Anyways, this is directed at situations and people that have righteously pissed me off, and something someone said about what one of the people was doing. ...It really pissed me off as you can see.
When sang it sounds right, said as a poem, kinda... Just read, no.

I don't really like the second half, maybe I'll rewrite it and add more later, maybe... 
Dunno yet... whatever.
Still pissed.

To Commissioners, I'm almost done with the first commission, I just had to write this before the entire thing escaped me. I only write poetry when I'm in emotional states after all..
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Pretty cliche theme. Seems like it's written by a an angry preteen annoyed about school and such. All in all, something like this has been done a million time before, and none of them have meant much, to anyone other than just someone being angry about some little thing and blowing it outta proportion. Overall, fascination with "Anarchy" is very common with preteen aged people, trying to make their own image and defying the norms and such of people of preteen age. Indeed, many of these preteen anarchy children are very annoying to deal with when they write stupid uninspired bullshit like this